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It’s been a long time since I reign this dying world
This dry land that’s the only thing I see…

Black gardens hidden behind mile high walls
Dead mountains covered by blood sharp stones
Illegible symbols marked all over this unwelcoming gate
Empty crucifixions lined up neat and straight.

There are no colors there is no light
Movement is frozen and time has never been right
The only sounds are the shrills of horror and pain
And everything you touch burns your hand under my reign.

Nothing can live, nothing can die.
Nothing is true, nothing’s a lie.
This world has belonged to me and I have belonged to it
Preachfully undeparted, worthy every bit.

The only thing I can do is sit here alone
Always perched over my castle filled of the unknown…

No one is aware of the place this land lays
But I am sure I will be pulled out someday…
Until then I wait in silence
Watching my empty land decay.
©2007-2009 ~corcega
:iconcorcega:

Author's Comments

I have been trapped in this terra for a long time, and now that I have finally escaped I warn you... never fall in...

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Okay, I am amazed... And speechless.
This is one of the greatest poems I've ever read! Definitely deserves a fave! :+favlove:

These are my favourite lines:

"Nothing can live, nothing can die.
Nothing is true, nothing’s a lie."


I just LOVE this kind of, shall I say, paradox.
You are incredibly good at Surrealism!

:clap:

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"This emptiness I've made my home
Embracing memories of dreams long gone
One last caress from the corpse of love is all I want
Underneath the cyanide sun..."
:iconcorcega:
Thank you so much! This my favorite poem that I have written so far... :blackrose:
I just tried to describe what it is to be trapped in your own depression, Its like a differrent world were nothing but that matters...

Thanks again dear, I really apreciate your comments :heart:
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La verdad que me gusto tanto que quice recitarlo, aunque es la primera vez que me pongo a recitar algo y no soy muy bueno te paso el mp3 [link]

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Bien, lo recitaste muy bien, exactamente como lo recitaba yo adentro d mi cabeza cuando lo escribi! :aww:
Muchisimas gracias x el :+fav:
me alegra de que t gusto :hug:
:iconstarlit-sky:
beautifully written:clap:
:iconsillysillychick:
i just kinda tripped over this and i had to say:wow, i really like the way that you have wrote that, im now heading to check out your other work,

fav+btw

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if you says its too much too young
then i'm going to smile and say
even if i get my heart broken
i wouldnt have it any other way.
<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
:iconcorcega:
Thank you very much... I worked really hard on this one :aww:
:iconcorcega:
:blushes: Thank you very much! I am so happy to hear that someone liked the piece!
Ill stop by youre gallery too :), thanks for the :+fav:
:iconsillysillychick:
woo! somone is looking at my gallery!! opps
*calms down* thanks, and the fav was desereved.

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if you says its too much too young
then i'm going to smile and say
even if i get my heart broken
i wouldnt have it any other way.
<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

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